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Comic panel experiment by Pink-Diapers Comic panel experiment by Pink-Diapers
I'm trying out a new technique in regards to my backgrounds. I was hoping to have an animated movie feel to this, but I feel like I missed my mark.

The perspective is way off and the background, instead of looking painterly looks muddy and blurred.

It's only a first try. :P
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What can I say about this picture? Amazing, The very details and effort put into this work makes it the wonder to look at, and not just for the diapers. The way the foreground blends into the background is quite amazing, you can actually see the lights reflection on the crib bars, which is little details that make this work anything but an eyesore, the padding looks crinkly, the face has depth, and the objects in the crib look very detailed and organized, What really caught my eye first was the tattoo on her arm, which looks like it's been there forever, and looks very natural against her skin. Amazing work as always Pink, keep it up~!
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Count-Hoshioni Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you should do more of this Its incredible!!!
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Aw, thanks!  I would like to get back to it at some point.  I'll have to wait till I'm not so busy.
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Count-Hoshioni Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hope you do!
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pullups247 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
ur shit iz so freaking awsome!!!!!!!!!!!
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
thank you!  :D
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ABMike Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Wow .. this is very original, the depth and lighting is amazing. There is a story here but its not very obvious -- very cleverly done.
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Thanks so much.  Hopefully I can do more like it soon.
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SaturnRinger Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Hm...the background does seem a little blurry, but I do think that this is a good first stroke towards an animated movie feel. I think you didn't miss your mark by too much.

The girl is really well-done, even if she "pops" a little looking so vibrant against this background. I always find it interesting when you do characters that put both "adult" AND "baby" in "Adult Baby", and I think this one has that same kinda vibe with the classic "diaper, t-shirt, long socks and pigtails" look combined with little details like the slightly "punk" look of her pigtrails and t-shirt, the tattoos, or her expression, which conveys more maturity to me than the diaper suggests. It works interestingly with a more babyish background, making her look distinct from it while still belonging in that context...certainly one of your characters that can convey a great deal of personality just from how you drew their pose, clothing, and expression, which makes one curious to know more about her.
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
I feel like this piece is a bit of a stepping stone as far as getting the hang of how the comics I do in the future will look.  I don't think it's that successful as is.

Thanks as always SR
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Gangstaballa1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Phebee is very cute and sexy in her crib with her diaper on
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Sonicrailin Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
not a bad job
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MrNogee Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
The background is a bit blurry, I think it it was more sharp, it would definitely have that old-school cartoon feel to it. The subject looks amazing. The tattoo is totally kickass looking. 
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Thanks, you might be right.
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XThePaganCanidX Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Good job on this! :)
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Thanks.
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MoonwolfYouthOtaku Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice!
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
thank you.
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MoonwolfYouthOtaku Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob ^^
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Hadalis Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
I like it! The shadows may not be your best, granted, but the background animated "look" reminded me of the old 1992 film, COOL WORLD. Remember the tag line? "If Holli Wood, she could..."(with the voice of Kim Basinger).

And you remain the master of drawing those huge, poofy diapers, Pink! 
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Yeah, I actually love Cool World, even tho most people seem to really hate it.

Thanks, I do love to draw diapers.  It's nice to hear I might be good at it.
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animal-delos Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013   Writer
Very nice shading. The effect of the shadow of what would be the bars of the crib you don't see over her are very well done. Though proportionately her size does seem a bit small or the background large for things. Like it seems the background was slapped on after the fact without size adjustments. I mean this is if you want a serious critique that would be it. It just doesn't seem like it... fits, ya know?
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Yeah, I have to work harder on having the character and the background work together.  I drew the bg separately on different paper, and resized it in PS.  I need to work on this technique a lot more before I'm successful. 
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animal-delos Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013   Writer
You'll get there eventually. ^^
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Hope so
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mikey-the-little Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dis is so cyberpunk in feel. Please keep doing more. I can see da background being blurry as da character is in focus, but yeah, it's a little too blurry in dis instance.
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Yeah, I tend to overdo the blur at times.
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Jessy373 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Agreed on the background being too blurry, though I'd say it is more the fact that the entire background feels the same level of burry, rather then the level/amount of burry that is the problem. The railings on the crib shouldn't be as burry as the walls in the background, for example, it makes the entire image feel flat.

As for the style, personally I thought you did a pretty good job capturing an animated movie feel to it :3
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Yeah, the piece has a ton of flaws.  I was more then a little disappointed.  Better luck next time, I guess.

Thanks about the movie feel.  We'll see how it goes.
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Jessy373 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist
I don't think it has that many flaws, I just think the depth is just really the only issue :3 And don't be disappointed, not everything works out when you try different things~ Just gotta keep at it :3
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Yeah, that's good advice.  Thank you.
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Jessy373 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Anytime Pink <3 Your an amazing artist, anything I can do to help give another perspective for you, I'm just glad I can help! :3
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
I really do Appreciate it.

Hugs
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ShaneySqueeBoy Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can feel an animated movie feel to this! :D
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Pink-Diapers Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Cool, it's what I was going for.
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ShaneySqueeBoy Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!! :D
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